I want to review it higher, I dig your concepts and I like where it's going. It could sound great, but I can't hear your lead above your bass, your percussion isn't coming through at all.
Basically, I like it a lot, I just can't hear it.
I'm not perfect, I use Soundgoodizer a lot when mixing, but still. I'd like to hear the different, unique parts of the song more clearly.
Good job otherwise!